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小乐 | 乔巴的善意

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乐爸:乔巴是一只狸猫··|,哦··|,不对··|,它是一头驯鹿··|--。因为乔巴从小吃了人人果实··|,可以变化成人形··|,但因此造成了人和驯鹿都认为它是一头怪物··|,只有希鲁鲁克医生把它当做朋友··|,也引领乔巴走上了医生的道路··|,并给了他一个海盗的梦想··|--。


Kindness

Katie


Chopper hadn’t think about so much things, he just saved a woman’s life, because he was a doctor, and that was his job.


Even though he was afraid of human, he still cured that woman, but he never thought of that the boy with black hair will invited him to be their friend.



But now Chopper was standing on the snow ground, and that boy stood on the roof. In the boy’s hand was the most precious thing in Chopper’s life — A pirate flag. He was protecting it, not only the flag, but also Chopper’s faith as a doctor. Chopper believed, with a kindness heart, he can cured everything.



On the rooftop, the boy stood still. Wind blew up his black hair and his red jacket. His fingers tightened on the flag, there was snow on his hair and his clothes. He hardly moved. He was serious, his eyes were staring at Chopper. Chopper can felt the kindness and firmness through those eyes. This boy tried to protect him, and also protected his honor as a doctor.


As Chopper was wondering, he heard the boy’s voice: “Do you want to be my friend?”


本次的写作小乐融合了的要求··|,参考下文写了一段描述··|,你发现了吗|-··?

In the moonlight, Sophie caught a glimpse of an enormous long pale wrinkly face with the most enormous ears. The nose was as sharp as a knife, and above the nose there were two bright flashing eyes, and the eyes were staring straight at Sophie. There was a fierce and devilish look about them.


附我们每周一言的小伙伴 Serena 的点评:

You made the fact that kindness is contagious really obvious in your writing piece; because he saved a human, the boy invited Chopper to be his friend. The pictures of the flag, Chopper, and the boy are very matching to the story. In the first sentence the “hadn’t think”should be “hadn’t thought” because hadn’t is past tense.


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