小乐 | 乔巴的善意
Chopper hadn’t think about so much things, he just saved a woman’s life, because he was a doctor, and that was his job.
Even though he was afraid of human, he still cured that woman, but he never thought of that the boy with black hair will invited him to be their friend.
But now Chopper was standing on the snow ground, and that boy stood on the roof. In the boy’s hand was the most precious thing in Chopper’s life — A pirate flag. He was protecting it, not only the flag, but also Chopper’s faith as a doctor. Chopper believed, with a kindness heart, he can cured everything.
On the rooftop, the boy stood still. Wind blew up his black hair and his red jacket. His fingers tightened on the flag, there was snow on his hair and his clothes. He hardly moved. He was serious, his eyes were staring at Chopper. Chopper can felt the kindness and firmness through those eyes. This boy tried to protect him, and also protected his honor as a doctor.
As Chopper was wondering, he heard the boy’s voice: “Do you want to be my friend?”
In the moonlight, Sophie caught a glimpse of an enormous long pale wrinkly face with the most enormous ears. The nose was as sharp as a knife, and above the nose there were two bright flashing eyes, and the eyes were staring straight at Sophie. There was a fierce and devilish look about them.
附我们每周一言的小伙伴 Serena 的点评：
You made the fact that kindness is contagious really obvious in your writing piece; because he saved a human, the boy invited Chopper to be his friend. The pictures of the flag, Chopper, and the boy are very matching to the story. In the first sentence the “hadn’t think”should be “hadn’t thought” because hadn’t is past tense.